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    October 14

    今天写了一页纸的作文

        今天要写申请奖学金的 study proposal
        首先google想找找有没有可供参考的文字, 找到一个关于指导留学申请的英文的网站,看一篇申请奖学金的例文,看的不爽,总觉得没有实际内容,太煽情,浪费读者时间,这例文的评语说"一个xx的xx的形象跃然纸上"...这倒是真话,不过我觉得proposal不应该写成抒情文。找了一个同办公室的老外,想听听他的评语,他看了一眼就说"no, I don't agree with it".英雄所见略同...我就打消了看网上例文的念头。
        然后请教了先申请一步的同学,看看他大概怎么样组织,细节写到什么程度。然后我就开始写了,先介绍我要做的东西,然后介绍我以前做了些什么,现在在做什么,以后的计划要做什么,根据什么觉得作这样东西好。要把这些内容放到一页纸上,又想让人觉得简洁而言之有物,一句句的斟酌了超过四五小时才写完第一稿。然后给同办公室的ZJP看,该了不少错误,然后自己又读一遍改一次,一共改了十几次,准备让ZJP帮忙看第二次,没问题就准备给导师看看。回家的时候快晚上十点了,还有包括ZJP的两位同学在办公室奋斗. 加油阿。
        话说回来,其实我觉得没什么机会能申请到,因为我分数太低了,十分接近minimum requirement, 不过还是尽力试一下。

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    Sui Huangwrote:
    最后两老板每人帮忙改了一次才交上去
    Oct. 22
    佳萍 朱wrote:
    you are welcome~~
    Oct. 20
    Sui Huangwrote:
    Today I again worked on it from 3pm to 9pm, finally sent it out to supervisor. Thank you for ZhuJiaPing and Joanathan for proof reading.
    Oct. 14
    Sui Huangwrote:
    好久没腐败过了,明天?
    Oct. 14
    Yu Wangwrote:
    什么时候去腐败一下?
    Oct. 14

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